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Charles Nicol's avatar

Sassy dialogue, good story overall. Not my cup of tea, but it is objectively well written.

Ilmahn Nabri's avatar

Thanks, I tend to pride myself on dialogue. I wanted something to encapsulate a fantasy world without using highbrow speech like Shakespeare or Tolkien but not devolving into modern colloquialism. Curious, since you brought it up, what is your cup of tea?